Rejections are In

So, the big news. Finally got a response out of Poetry Magazine. It was a nice little rejection letter. So there are now four poems that need to move out to the next possible location. Not quite sure where to send them next, but I think "Arrogance" would kinda work in Aasimov's Science Fiction, "Tinted Mirror" would work well in Necrology, and the other two, "Invisible Eris" and "Two Days", may not quite work anywhere.

Some may take rejection as defeat. I take it as a necessary evil. If things weren't rejected, we'd never be able to get non-serious writers to pursue something else. You gotta have a tough skin to write. That's not a secret. I know that I've had some poetry published in the past, and I know that it's been a while since I wrote poetry with much commitment. I expect to have a lot of places reject my work before anything is accepted. A few successes here and there couldn't hurt any though.

Since I was rejected, I've finished the first draft of a new short story, "Tactical Medics", and am about six drafts through a fresh poem, "Ignorance." The short story, is a bit of a fun slap in the face. I'm pretty excited about the first draft, but I won't be getting too far ahead of myself. I want to give it a couple good thick edits before turning it over to the Underground Writers on October 1st. That'll give me feedback for October 15th, and I can clean it up and maybe submit it somewhere (On Spec ?) for November 1st. I'm saving "Ignorance" for my next set of 4 poems to ship out to Poetry Magazine, which I also hope to be able to do on November 1st.

Speaking of work in progress. The Underground Writers currently has "Bloodspurt" in their hands, and I'm sure they'll be ripping it up good. I've already read through a few of the pieces that I need to have done for Thursday. One of them is absolutely fantastic, the others are pretty good starts of which I hope to read more. When I get "Bloodspurt" back, I'll know how much time I should really be editing that piece. I'm sure its a lot. With a bit of luck, I should be able to send it out for the beginning of October, but that may be optimistic given the piece itself.

Dug up a couple of fantasy pieces I started a couple years ago, and I think with some work, I can finish them and get them sent out somewhere. I'm betting on Tales of the Talisman for one of them, but figure it won't be going out until the new year. With National Novel Writing Month sitting on the horizon, I won't be putting words down on anything but Hedged in November. Still have some time this month I suppose.

Anyhow, enough writing in the form of procrastination. I need to turn my writing to one of my WIPs. Good luck everyone!

On Words and Working

Always busy with this business. I've done a lot in the past month since I last posted here. I haven't written nearly as much as I had hoped in the past while, but that's because I've been doing a lot of other work in other areas. Trying to get things running smoothly all around can take up a lot of time, but now that things seem to be hammered out, I think I'll be able to crank-up my word count, tune up the ticker, and get myself on the healthy track.

I managed to finish the first full draft of "Bloodspurt" (4189 words) on September 1st. I knew while writing it that it wasn't quite turning out the way that I wanted it to, but that may be mid-project dislike and boredom, the bane of writers across the world. It seems whenever you hit the mid-point of a project, other ideas start battering at you and you find it difficult to keep going, and then, you have to decide whether the ending you originally thought up will still work with the piece and things fall apart. I managed to hammer my way through it so that I could call the first, unedited draft finished. I had a very concrete deadline, and I'm glad that this was provided for me, though I'm sure about half my story is going to get itself ripped to shreds.

I have my writing group to thank for the concrete deadline. The Underground Writers decided about midway through August that we needed to have deadlines and that we needed to critique in order to help each other grow as writers. I know that I have a lot of room for growth, so I was very eager to get some stuff out. We have a 1st of the month deadline for pieces, which means that we essentially have to complete one piece, or at least 5k words every month. That may not seem like many words, but in some cases, that could be a huge difference, and even if the pieces being sent out never get seen beyond the group, it's still a good way for us to learn from each other.

Of course, "Bloodspurt" wasn't the only piece I worked on over the past month. I've also managed a number of writing exercises that I may be able to make use of in other pieces, a short science fiction song, and a handful of words for my novel, The Fall of Order. Not nearly as far along as I had hoped, but it's something. I need to get the first draft fully wrapped up by the end of October so I can step into NaNo 2009 fresh.

Still no word from Poetry Magazine about getting published. So I'll have to wait a bit longer on that front. I'm hoping to sit down sometime this labour day weekend and scribble out five or six decent poems to send them after the current batch is accepted/rejected. If rejected, I'll cycle the current batch to the next publisher on the list and work my way from there. I know two of the four can definitely be picked up, the other two probably can as well. I have high hopes.

Submissions Outs

It's time for another of the many periodic updates of writing in my neck of the woods. There's been a few ups and downs since my last entry, and I hope to cover them all without sounding like I'm bragging or whining, a difficult feat. I just hope I don't forget to cover something important.

First off, in regards to The Fall of Order, I've managed to squeeze out a measely 2044 words since my last update. So much stuff has been going on in the real world that I've been struggling to bring myself to edit this piece. Still going to crank away at it. I actually have two hours tonight set aside to work on this project. I'm hoping to get past the roommate's story and move into a nice little betrayal scene. Should be fun stuff. Wish me luck.

For my NaNo novel, I've come up with a sort of "Epiphany Summary" and drawn the main ideas out of the main group of character's epiphanies. These will be something of a guide for the novel. If a scene doesn't somehow move one of the character's closer to their epiphany, or have them get blocked in trying to reach that goal, then the scene should have no place in the book. I then scribbled down a list of some 32 scenes, 11 locations, and 9 research topics I'm going to have to dig into. I took a bit of time the other day to do some research at The Townhouse. Since one of the characters comes from the big city, I was thinking of making her a bit of a metal-head. Went out to a Wolven Ancestry concert and scribbled notes while I pretended to drink. Not sure if I'll use those notes in this story, but it's still useful research. Floated the story synopsis by a few writers and got some nods and "neats." Not overly useful criticism, but I can trust them to tell me "It's not my kind of thing" if it's a shitty idea, so I think I'm safe.

I've also begun work on a couple of pieces of flash fiction. One story, entitled "Bloodspurt" managed 485 words in the skeletal draft. The other piece I've barely touched on and sits around 118 words so far. I hope to clean up "Bloodspurt" and have it ready for submission by late-September. The second piece, I hope to have cleaned up and ready for submission by the end of October. That should leave me free to work on NaNo during November. I also have two short articles of approximately 150 words taking opposite sides on the Death Penalty debate that I may be able to put aside for a piece some point in the future.

Yesterday I sent four poems (Arrogance, Tinted Mirror, Invisible Eris, and Two Days) to poetry magazine. They have an 8-week response time, so by October 5th, 2009, I should know whether or not they'll be picking up any of my work. I have hope for two of the four poems that I sent. The other two, well, I had been told they were worthwile a couple years ago but never made use of them. I don't feel as good about them as the people that told me to send them, but we'll just have to wait and see. According to the site, they pay $10/line, minimum $300 (though the Writer's Market says min $150). If all were accepted, I'd be looking at a $760 US cheque. That's nice to think about, but I'm not going to count on anything. Just going to keep scribbling some poetry and see if it takes me anywhere.

On the writing group and arts Sudbury side of things, there's been something of a cataclysm. The Sudbury Hypergraphic Society has split between those who beleive the point of the group is to write, and those who beleive the point of the group is to promote arts activities and their own work locally as a non-profit organization. I had always thought the purpose of the group was to inflict hypergraphia (a neurological disorder whereby one is unable to stop writing) upon ourselves, and thus fell firmly in the first camp. It's sad to see something that I helped form rip itself apart, but many of us have seen it coming for a couple months but had been hoping that it would blow over. It hasn't and thus a split has become necessary. Unfortunately, that means I have two red shirts with the SHS ironed across them that I now need to toss at Value Village.

On the bright side, the new writing-side of the group has agreed to meet weekly instead of bi-weekly. We will be writing and critiquing. That is our goal, our purpose, and our endeavour. We will see ourselves published when we are ready, and we will support each other in our writing endeavours. The "Underground Writers" as our blog has been called for the past 26 days, will continue to carry on the spirit that many of us though the SHS was supposed to embody.

That pretty much brings everything up to date. Time to get to work on editing The Fall of Order. Stay tuned for future updates.

The Next Project

Hello once again. There's always a tonne to do when you're trying to get into making money off your writing, and when you volunteer and run writing activities. Needless to say, I've been making with the writing. I've worked on three different projects over the past couple of weeks, only one of which I've spoken about here, so I'll review my progress.

On The Fall Of Order I've managed to crank through a fair number of words of editing and even a little bit of new writing. In a span of about five days I managed to edit/write about 10k. That's not too shabby a number. The problem is where I'm sitting with it currently. I know exactly what needs to occur next in order to link my sections, but I'm having trouble getting down to actually write it. The idea just doesn't seem concrete enough for me to take it to the next level. As a result, the last four times I've sat down to work on it, I've barely managed to get through any words. I'm pushing it aside for a couple days so I can hammer on with it fresh instead of frustrated. That may put my final deadline back a few days, but I'm hoping once I get past the roadblock, I'll cruise.

During the most recent meeting of the Sudbury Hypergraphic Society, I managed to crank out a fresh, 16-line poem. Normally cranking out a poem wouldn't excite me overly much and I wouldn't even mention it. But today, I feel I actually wrote, and re-wrote (9 time) a pretty decent piece. I'm going to get it cleaned up and titled, and then send it out to see if I can't get five or ten for it from a magazine. I think it stands a fair chance.

This past Monday night, when I sat down to work on The Fall of Order, I couldn't do it. Instead, the idea for this year's National Novel Writing Month popped into my head. I managed to crank out an idea statement, two character sketches, and then a one-page treatment giving me a really good idea about the direction of the novel. I was very excited when I left the library, continued to work on the idea while on the bus, and decided to float it by a few peers. So far, the reaction is very good. Very good as in "when are you writing this novel because I want to read it right now." Working out another pair of character sketches today for a couple of important secondary characters. I have confidence that I'll be able to write a really workable piece this November. I just hope I can wait until November to write it.

Enough for today. I need to get back to my other job.