Hitting a Wall

So I'm stuck. Like most writers out there, eventually we do hit walls. There's all sorts of advice on how to blaze past it, and I've shoved my way through a great many of them in the past, but it's here none the less. I had been working hard to hammer out the first chapter of a YA novel. I struggled immensely, managed a little over 1000 words in about a month, and decided that it just wasn't going to work out. Or atleast, that idea wasn't going to work out.

I came home from the Monday Night Writer's Pack, and cranked out about 800 words of a different piece. Mostly random, no real plot or ideas, just playing around a bit. It sounded alright, and over the past week, I've more than doubled the number of words. Catch is, it was just a kind of exercise and I've no clue where I want to go with it, if anywhere. I may have the kernals of something, but they haven't popped yet.

To make matters worse, I had a deadline this past Thursday to submit a piece for critiquing with the Underground Writers, and there's one today with the Monday Night Writing Pack that I'm going to be missing. I'm going to have to send an apology in lieu of submission to both I'm afraid. The piece I sunk a month into isn't fit for human eyes, and the one I started last week, although better, isn't ready for critiquing by any soul.

The editing of Hedged In has come to a bit of a stand-still as of late. I have to get it all finished up and rewritten before the month is out, so I'm probably going to end up focusing on that. Maybe I'll submit the first 4k of that novella to the groups in March. I don't think it'll quite be publishable quality, but I'm going to get my free print copy to which I'm entitled. If the critiquing of the edited version goes well enough, and another rewrite puts out something I think is ok, I'll grab a couple of beta readers and e-publish it through Smashwords. If I get $20 out of it, I'll be happy enough.

Julia and I have begun work on Script Frenzy. We've got a basic timetable planned out, and a to-do list that we'll have to chew through. It looks like we'll be going all-out this year, with a tonne of events including another all-nighter. We've given each event its own name (more or less). Hopefully we'll get a good turnout and Script Frenzy can grow like NaNoWriMo did this past year. I've got a pretty good idea of what I'm going to be scripting this year, and I think it'll be a blast!

Anyhow, I'm going to try to break through my wall. Someone told me changing the colour of your "paper" works. We'll see how that goes.

Editing a NaNo Novel

So NaNoWriMo is all finished up. It's been over a week and it's time for things to get swinging again, despite the December rush. I flipped through the NaNo site today and got my code for Createspace. Anyone that managed to complete their 50k words during the month of November gets a code that gives them a free proof copy of their novel from them.

Prior to this year, I never would have really looked at the whole self-publish realm. Basically, it's just like self-aggrandizement. People self-publish their crap just to feel good about themselves. Nothing of real quality comes out of it, and there's no way to take it seriously or make any actual money off of it. Yeah, that's what I used to think. Then I met Randolph Lalonde, the author of the Spinward Fringe series.

Randy has been writing his series for a while, and currently lives off his self-published novels. Most of his writing is available only in e-book format, though you can now order print copies as well. His books are actually really good and addicting, so it's no wonder he's doing well on the self-pub market. Taking a chance and actually reading some self-published stuff has given, in my mind, some legitimacy to the style.

Sure, I still want to see some stuff get published through traditional sources. I plan to submit some queries once I get the first book polished, and have all three books in my Werewolf & Witched Trilogy drafted. So why did I bring up Createspace then? Well, I want that free proof copy. And if after a couple years of shopping around the first novel (which can stand alone if I so choose) no one has picked it up, I can go ahead and put my approval on the Createspace publication and give a go at the self-pub market. Scrounge up an e-book version for Smashwords and Mobipocket, and I'll end up seeing whether I can get some coin back from my efforts.

But more important, the Createspace thing gives me a deadline. Basically, it tells me that I must have my novel fully polished by Mid-May 2010 at the latest. Moving along those lines I did a couple of things today: I formatted things for Createspace submission (5.25" x 8", size 8 font, 3/4" margins), cut the file off at the end of the first book, ran the thing through spellcheck (an hour-long process), and then began editing. I made it through the 26th page. This is going to be painful.

It turns out almost every character other than the MC has the same name in these first 26 pages. People take on other character's speech habits, and there are already inconsistencies of character. I've cut almost half of what was there, and will have to rewrite a good chunk of the other half. This is the chore of a NaNo novel I suppose.

While I'm moving my way through the editing of this novel, I'm going to have to continue to work on the second novel. As I said, I won't be shopping the book around until after I have all three done at least in first draft form. I want to have the first draft of the 2nd book done before February, and the first draft of the 3rd book complete before April so I can focus on Script Frenzy.

Lots to do, little time to do it in. Wish me luck!